Lookathernow 24 11 16 Asteria Jade Horny Client... (HD)

Should the story incorporate more technological details about the data she is stealing, or should the focus remain on the tension of these underground meetings?

"Authorize the transfer," she said, her voice dropping to a sharp, commanding edge. "My time is expensive, and this window won't stay open forever." LookAtHerNow 24 11 16 Asteria Jade Horny Client...

Asteria slid into the booth opposite a man whose eyes were darting nervously around the lounge. Kaelen didn't immediately look at the encrypted datapad she placed on the table; instead, he studied her with an intense, unsettling fascination. Kaelen didn't immediately look at the encrypted datapad

"He’s in the back booth," a voice crackled through Asteria's discreet comms unit. "Name’s Kaelen. He’s impulsive and easily distracted. Keep him focused on the data transfer, Asteria. Don't let his personal interests stall the credit exchange." He’s impulsive and easily distracted